policies ENGL489 Advanced Portfolio Workshop
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COURSE DESCRIPTION
This course is meant to help move you from the student writer that you have been to the professional writer you are about to become—whatever that profession may be. Thus, the work of the class is designed to make you ready for the next phase of your writing life. The class will ask you to develop the discipline of a working writer, to mature as a writer in terms of craft, and, finally, to create a body of work—a portfolio—that is representative of your talents and ready to be read by potential agents, graduate schools, or employers.
This course is designed as the capstone experience for English majors who have chosen to pursue the Writing & Writing Studies Concentration. The course assumes everyone enrolled takes seriously the hard work it takes to be a writer, is interested in honing his craft, and, to varying degrees, knows that writing will be a part of her life for the rest of it.
The basic mode of the course is the workshop. You will workshop both in small groups organized by genre; you will workshop as an entire class, responding as readers rather than experts when you are not as familiar with the genre as you could be. In order to workshop, of course, you need something to be workshopped. Thus, you will have a heavy writing commitment over the course of the semester. Your own writing work will be complimented by a heavy reading diet of genres, both new and familiar, that expose you to writing and writers other than yourself—no good writer would say they aren’t also good readers. Finally, you will do a modest number of exercises meant to acquaint you with the business side—not to be confused with the business end—of writing for a living.
COURSE GOALS
By the end of this class you should:
Bill Henderson The Pushcart Prize XL:
Best of the Small Presses 2016 Edition.
Jessie Ann Foley The Carnival at Bray
Paul Murray The Mark and the Void
Helen McDonald H is for Hawk
Branden
Jacob-Jenkins The Octoroon
A.J. Banner The Good Neighbor
Sydney Padua The Thrilling Adventures of Lovelace and Babbage:
The (Mostly) True Story of the First Computer
And those texts made available as handouts via email or online for our course.
REQUIREMENTS
Attendance & Participation. While I am loath to require attendance to a 400 level course—a course a student should be taking because they are far enough along in their academic career that they see the value of coming to class—experience tells me that I need to put in writing some manner of policy. Additionally, this class only meets once a week, which means that missing one class is missing one full week of class. Successive absences will seriously jeopardize your grade. Thus, attendance is required to every class..
Finally, excessive late arrivals will accumulate to equal at least one absence.
Workshop Participation. Workshops only work when everyone holds up their end of the bargain. Thus, on workshop days, whether they are for small writing groups or for the entire class, you must come to class having read your colleague’s material and be prepared to discuss that material. If there is a required written component, you should have this material prepared as well. If you are being workshopped, you should make sure that your material is available to be read by your colleagues the week before. Failure to attend and be prepared for class on a workshop day will count as two absences.
Additionally, feedback should help your colleagues become better writers. Feedback should not be needlessly hurtful or harsh. It should also not be full of empty praise but fully useless. We will conduct civil workshops in this class. At midterm and at the end of the semester, you will receive written feedback on your workshop performance as part of your formal evaluation and letter grade.
Conferencing. Real writers meet with editors regularly, and that is how meetings with me will work this semester. I will serve as editor and reader to whatever material you are working on. You are required to meet with me two times over the course of the semester. You will come to the meeting prepared with writing. We will read and discuss what you bring for about a half hour. I would suggest you balance out your meetings with me over the course of the semester and not wait until the last minute. Further, if you fail to meet with me, each non-meeting will count as an absence. Failure to come to the conference prepared might also count as an absence depending on how bad it goes, and it will certainly engender my considerable ire aimed—like a furious laser—at you.
In-Class Reading Notes (abbreviated on the syllabus as ICRNs). Lots of writers say some version of the following, but Stephen King, a very successful writer by any measure, says it very well: “If you don't have the time to read, you don't have the time or the tools to write.” All writer’s read. Don’t kid yourself otherwise. One thing we will do in this class is read a lot of different genres and read a lot about these different genres. Reading as a writer is different than just reading. You are, essentially, writing to learn how to do your job—whatever your job is going to be. So for all of the genres that we read, you will be asked to write about it in class.
Writer’s Notebook. You will be required to keep a writer’s notebook for this class. Informal writing leads to formal writing and writing everyday leads to the habits of The Writer's Notebook requires you to commit to writing frequently—nearly daily—in an effort to help you develop the discipline of writing. The WN will look different ways for different writers at different times in the semester.
The Writer's Notebook should be a useful space for you to begin to develop and draft what will become more formal pieces of writing. So, for instance, while you are working on your Rethink/Revise, your Writer’s Notebook might be filled with work for that. While you work on your Final Project, your Writer’s Notebook might be filled with work for that. And, of course, it might also just be filled with stuff it struck you to write about that week.
We meet once a week so the word “notebook” is meant figuratively rather than literally. If you like the physical sensation of writing in some sort of notebook, fine. But you’ll need two of them so you can turn one in to me each week. If it’s possible for you to keep your notebook on a computer (as I do), than you can just turn in new pages to me each week. I’ll have Writer's Notebook folders for folks who turn in loose pages. More information is available on our course website about this and all other assignments.
In-Class Genre Exercises. As we read different genre, there will be occasions when I ask you to try to write a small thing in the style of the genre. They will always be in-class and will never be homework. They will be totally informal and will require no great talent on your part. I’ll do them will you so you can see exactly how little talent the exercises require.
Formal Writing. You will have three formal writing experiences this semester. Further detailed information is available on our course website for these and all other assignments.
Mentor Text Memoir. In the first weeks of the semester we will focus on a semi-formal piece of personal writing that I am calling the Mentor Text Memoir. What is a mentor text? It is a text that taught us how to read and/or write. You'll select the most important ones you've encountered in your reading life and write about the ways they've mentored you as a writer.
Rethink/Revise. During the first half of the semester, you will take stock of where your skills are. You will spend time re-thinking and then revising a piece of writing from earlier in your college career. You should select a text that you believe in, but it does not have to be entirely successful in its current iteration. You should expect to spend some time thinking about what worked and what didn’t, considering how well-crafted the piece is, how professional a version it is (rather than a student version). We will spend some time in class looking at ways to advance the text. You will workshop the piece more than once. And the final, revised piece will make up the bulk of your midterm portfolio.
Final Project. As the catchy title of this assignment would imply, this project will ask you to bring all of your skills, talents, and hard work to bear on a final piece of writing. This is a capstone project of your own design. You will decide around midterm what that project will be, and you will spend the rest of the semester working on it. You will workshop the piece in the class at least once, and, I would expect, at least one of your meetings with me will be taken up with working on this text.
Some students find, as we near the midterm, that they just don't know what to do for a final capstone project. If you find yourself in that place, it is a good idea to use of one of your conferences with me to figure that out.
Supporting Assignments. It is not my intention to load you down with busy work this semester when you should be writing a lot of and working on your own material. There are two projects that I ask you to work on alongside your own writing and reading to augment that experience and to help introduce you to the world of professional writing. Complete details for this and all other assignments are available on our class website.
Interview with an Author. By the end of the semester, you are responsible for interviewing an author of your choosing on the writing life. You will need to do a short write up, a summary of sorts, that hits the highlights of what you learned about making a living as a writer. A NOTE: Students often complain about this assignment, but, in the end, they also find it one of the most valuable assignments they do in the class. Students learn a lot about a career they think they want. A SECOND NOTE: The hardest part is finding the right person to interview—and the range is wide—and then actually getting the interview out of them. It is due at the end of the semester to give you the time you need to do this right. Don’t wait until the last minute. Students often forget about this or put it off and then they end up not doing the assignment, hurting their grade needlessly. For my part, I will make the effort to remind folks more frequently to keep up with the assignment.
Finally, Bruce and Mulrooney are always gracious about giving interviews, but I've told both of them they can only serve as an interview for one student. I'm not doing this to be mean to you; I'm doing it because these guys have enough work without giving out five interviews for this one class.
Professionalization Presentations. In small groups, you will present on various ways you can make a living as a writer. You'll be asked to collect information about what kinds of jobs you would do, the money you might make, the training you might need. You'll be able to sign up for the topics you are most interested in researching and presenting on early in the semester. Presentations will start around the midterm. The first groups to go will get the most slack becaue they are, of course going first. They'll have the least amount of time to prepare and no real model for how to do the presentation itself. Complete information about this and the Interview with an Author assignment (and all assignments) are available on this website).
Portfolios. Twice this semester you will turn in a portfolio—once at midterm and once at the end of the semester. The midterm portfolio contains both revised and unrevised material as well as a cover letter that asks you to explore various theories of composing. It is a student portfolio. Your second portfolio consists exclusively of revised text, primarily your finished capstone Final Project described above, and whatever else you choose to include. It should be your best and finest work. This is a portfolio ready for your life after college. Additionally, the portfolios will give me the opportunity to formally assess your work this semester and assign a letter grade to it (see below for details how grading will work in our class) More information is available about this and all other assignments on our class website.
EVALUATION AND GRADING
You will not receive letter grades for individual assignments in this class. You will receive extensive written feedback on all formal writing assignments in the form of a letter. I will make samples of these letters available to you before our first workshop so you have a sense of what this feedback looks like and how it is connected to your final letter grade.
Comments on the Writer’s Notebook and ICRNs shouldn’t be treated like evaluation but rather like an ongoing conversation between you and me: think of it as a talk between us, only in written form. If I’m not commenting it means I’m bored.
At midterm and at the end of the semester you will receive a “grade-so-far” and a “final grade” letter respectively. They will be come attached to your midterm check in and final portfolio returns. In these letters you will receive a letter grade and an overview of your performance in the class up to that point, including attention to workshop performance. I have never encountered a student who didn’t have a clear sense of how they were doing in my class based on this system of evaluation, but if you should feel that you don’t know how you are doing, come see me. We’ll figure it out.
Different requirements require different kinds and amounts of effort; therefore, different assignments have different weight in terms of evaluation. Here is a rough breakdown of how things are weighted this semester:
ICRNs 10%
Writer’s Notebook 15%
Mentor Text Memoir 10%
Rethink/Revise & Midterm Portfolio 20%
Final Project & Final Portfolio 25%
Professionalization Presentation 10%
Interview with an Author 10%
Ultimately, your success in this class depends on the following:
OTHER THINGS
Plagiarism. How you could plagiarize in a class like this, I don’t know, but don’t try.
Students with disabilities. Students who need special accommodations due to a documented disability should come to see me with written documentation of the specific disability and suggested accommodations before the end of the first week of classes. We can discuss specific accommodations at that time.
The Writing Studio. Located in the Academic Achievement Center, on the bottom floor of the Library, the Writing Studio is available to any and all students at whatever level of expertise you might be at. They are a marvelous resource for this class. You can talk to them at any stage of your writing—from brainstorming, to drafting, to editing. If you are interested in getting useful and thorough feedback, the Writing Studio is a good place to go. The work they do will reinforce everything we are doing in this class. And I think a lot of folks who work there would relish the chance to talk about your writing with you.
While this class will present you with many challenges, I believe it has its share of pleasures and rewards. What matters most to me is that you try to be the best student you are capable of being—that you try to improve as a writer and thinker. No good teacher wants to give a student a bad grade. Good standing in this class is always yours to lose.
This course is meant to help move you from the student writer that you have been to the professional writer you are about to become—whatever that profession may be. Thus, the work of the class is designed to make you ready for the next phase of your writing life. The class will ask you to develop the discipline of a working writer, to mature as a writer in terms of craft, and, finally, to create a body of work—a portfolio—that is representative of your talents and ready to be read by potential agents, graduate schools, or employers.
This course is designed as the capstone experience for English majors who have chosen to pursue the Writing & Writing Studies Concentration. The course assumes everyone enrolled takes seriously the hard work it takes to be a writer, is interested in honing his craft, and, to varying degrees, knows that writing will be a part of her life for the rest of it.
The basic mode of the course is the workshop. You will workshop both in small groups organized by genre; you will workshop as an entire class, responding as readers rather than experts when you are not as familiar with the genre as you could be. In order to workshop, of course, you need something to be workshopped. Thus, you will have a heavy writing commitment over the course of the semester. Your own writing work will be complimented by a heavy reading diet of genres, both new and familiar, that expose you to writing and writers other than yourself—no good writer would say they aren’t also good readers. Finally, you will do a modest number of exercises meant to acquaint you with the business side—not to be confused with the business end—of writing for a living.
COURSE GOALS
By the end of this class you should:
- Develop an understanding of the habits of a working writer;
- Improve your understanding of craft as it relates to your own writing;
- Acquaint yourself with a wide range of genres that can lend themselves to a career in writing;
- Know about the processes, conventions, and requirements of becoming a working writer (rather than a student writer);
- Create a portfolio of polished work that can be used in various professional settings (agents, employers, graduate schools, publishers, teaching materials).
Bill Henderson The Pushcart Prize XL:
Best of the Small Presses 2016 Edition.
Jessie Ann Foley The Carnival at Bray
Paul Murray The Mark and the Void
Helen McDonald H is for Hawk
Branden
Jacob-Jenkins The Octoroon
A.J. Banner The Good Neighbor
Sydney Padua The Thrilling Adventures of Lovelace and Babbage:
The (Mostly) True Story of the First Computer
And those texts made available as handouts via email or online for our course.
REQUIREMENTS
Attendance & Participation. While I am loath to require attendance to a 400 level course—a course a student should be taking because they are far enough along in their academic career that they see the value of coming to class—experience tells me that I need to put in writing some manner of policy. Additionally, this class only meets once a week, which means that missing one class is missing one full week of class. Successive absences will seriously jeopardize your grade. Thus, attendance is required to every class..
- If you miss more than three classes, you will fail the course.
- If you miss a workshop—whether you are being workshopped or are workshopping the materials of other writers, it counts as two absences.
- If life circumstances require you to miss enough class that it will affect your grade, see me.
- Work is due the day it is due as listed on the syllabus. Absence is not an excuse for late work. If you know you will not be able to be in class on a certain day that work is due, turn the work in before, not after, the deadline.
Finally, excessive late arrivals will accumulate to equal at least one absence.
Workshop Participation. Workshops only work when everyone holds up their end of the bargain. Thus, on workshop days, whether they are for small writing groups or for the entire class, you must come to class having read your colleague’s material and be prepared to discuss that material. If there is a required written component, you should have this material prepared as well. If you are being workshopped, you should make sure that your material is available to be read by your colleagues the week before. Failure to attend and be prepared for class on a workshop day will count as two absences.
Additionally, feedback should help your colleagues become better writers. Feedback should not be needlessly hurtful or harsh. It should also not be full of empty praise but fully useless. We will conduct civil workshops in this class. At midterm and at the end of the semester, you will receive written feedback on your workshop performance as part of your formal evaluation and letter grade.
Conferencing. Real writers meet with editors regularly, and that is how meetings with me will work this semester. I will serve as editor and reader to whatever material you are working on. You are required to meet with me two times over the course of the semester. You will come to the meeting prepared with writing. We will read and discuss what you bring for about a half hour. I would suggest you balance out your meetings with me over the course of the semester and not wait until the last minute. Further, if you fail to meet with me, each non-meeting will count as an absence. Failure to come to the conference prepared might also count as an absence depending on how bad it goes, and it will certainly engender my considerable ire aimed—like a furious laser—at you.
In-Class Reading Notes (abbreviated on the syllabus as ICRNs). Lots of writers say some version of the following, but Stephen King, a very successful writer by any measure, says it very well: “If you don't have the time to read, you don't have the time or the tools to write.” All writer’s read. Don’t kid yourself otherwise. One thing we will do in this class is read a lot of different genres and read a lot about these different genres. Reading as a writer is different than just reading. You are, essentially, writing to learn how to do your job—whatever your job is going to be. So for all of the genres that we read, you will be asked to write about it in class.
- Strong Reading Notes will demonstrate that you’ve read the material and thought about them.
- Very strong Reading Notes will show that you’ve replied with care to that day’s prompts.
- Bad Reading Notes will demonstrate that you haven't read or read with any care.
Writer’s Notebook. You will be required to keep a writer’s notebook for this class. Informal writing leads to formal writing and writing everyday leads to the habits of The Writer's Notebook requires you to commit to writing frequently—nearly daily—in an effort to help you develop the discipline of writing. The WN will look different ways for different writers at different times in the semester.
The Writer's Notebook should be a useful space for you to begin to develop and draft what will become more formal pieces of writing. So, for instance, while you are working on your Rethink/Revise, your Writer’s Notebook might be filled with work for that. While you work on your Final Project, your Writer’s Notebook might be filled with work for that. And, of course, it might also just be filled with stuff it struck you to write about that week.
We meet once a week so the word “notebook” is meant figuratively rather than literally. If you like the physical sensation of writing in some sort of notebook, fine. But you’ll need two of them so you can turn one in to me each week. If it’s possible for you to keep your notebook on a computer (as I do), than you can just turn in new pages to me each week. I’ll have Writer's Notebook folders for folks who turn in loose pages. More information is available on our course website about this and all other assignments.
In-Class Genre Exercises. As we read different genre, there will be occasions when I ask you to try to write a small thing in the style of the genre. They will always be in-class and will never be homework. They will be totally informal and will require no great talent on your part. I’ll do them will you so you can see exactly how little talent the exercises require.
Formal Writing. You will have three formal writing experiences this semester. Further detailed information is available on our course website for these and all other assignments.
Mentor Text Memoir. In the first weeks of the semester we will focus on a semi-formal piece of personal writing that I am calling the Mentor Text Memoir. What is a mentor text? It is a text that taught us how to read and/or write. You'll select the most important ones you've encountered in your reading life and write about the ways they've mentored you as a writer.
Rethink/Revise. During the first half of the semester, you will take stock of where your skills are. You will spend time re-thinking and then revising a piece of writing from earlier in your college career. You should select a text that you believe in, but it does not have to be entirely successful in its current iteration. You should expect to spend some time thinking about what worked and what didn’t, considering how well-crafted the piece is, how professional a version it is (rather than a student version). We will spend some time in class looking at ways to advance the text. You will workshop the piece more than once. And the final, revised piece will make up the bulk of your midterm portfolio.
Final Project. As the catchy title of this assignment would imply, this project will ask you to bring all of your skills, talents, and hard work to bear on a final piece of writing. This is a capstone project of your own design. You will decide around midterm what that project will be, and you will spend the rest of the semester working on it. You will workshop the piece in the class at least once, and, I would expect, at least one of your meetings with me will be taken up with working on this text.
Some students find, as we near the midterm, that they just don't know what to do for a final capstone project. If you find yourself in that place, it is a good idea to use of one of your conferences with me to figure that out.
Supporting Assignments. It is not my intention to load you down with busy work this semester when you should be writing a lot of and working on your own material. There are two projects that I ask you to work on alongside your own writing and reading to augment that experience and to help introduce you to the world of professional writing. Complete details for this and all other assignments are available on our class website.
Interview with an Author. By the end of the semester, you are responsible for interviewing an author of your choosing on the writing life. You will need to do a short write up, a summary of sorts, that hits the highlights of what you learned about making a living as a writer. A NOTE: Students often complain about this assignment, but, in the end, they also find it one of the most valuable assignments they do in the class. Students learn a lot about a career they think they want. A SECOND NOTE: The hardest part is finding the right person to interview—and the range is wide—and then actually getting the interview out of them. It is due at the end of the semester to give you the time you need to do this right. Don’t wait until the last minute. Students often forget about this or put it off and then they end up not doing the assignment, hurting their grade needlessly. For my part, I will make the effort to remind folks more frequently to keep up with the assignment.
Finally, Bruce and Mulrooney are always gracious about giving interviews, but I've told both of them they can only serve as an interview for one student. I'm not doing this to be mean to you; I'm doing it because these guys have enough work without giving out five interviews for this one class.
Professionalization Presentations. In small groups, you will present on various ways you can make a living as a writer. You'll be asked to collect information about what kinds of jobs you would do, the money you might make, the training you might need. You'll be able to sign up for the topics you are most interested in researching and presenting on early in the semester. Presentations will start around the midterm. The first groups to go will get the most slack becaue they are, of course going first. They'll have the least amount of time to prepare and no real model for how to do the presentation itself. Complete information about this and the Interview with an Author assignment (and all assignments) are available on this website).
Portfolios. Twice this semester you will turn in a portfolio—once at midterm and once at the end of the semester. The midterm portfolio contains both revised and unrevised material as well as a cover letter that asks you to explore various theories of composing. It is a student portfolio. Your second portfolio consists exclusively of revised text, primarily your finished capstone Final Project described above, and whatever else you choose to include. It should be your best and finest work. This is a portfolio ready for your life after college. Additionally, the portfolios will give me the opportunity to formally assess your work this semester and assign a letter grade to it (see below for details how grading will work in our class) More information is available about this and all other assignments on our class website.
EVALUATION AND GRADING
You will not receive letter grades for individual assignments in this class. You will receive extensive written feedback on all formal writing assignments in the form of a letter. I will make samples of these letters available to you before our first workshop so you have a sense of what this feedback looks like and how it is connected to your final letter grade.
Comments on the Writer’s Notebook and ICRNs shouldn’t be treated like evaluation but rather like an ongoing conversation between you and me: think of it as a talk between us, only in written form. If I’m not commenting it means I’m bored.
At midterm and at the end of the semester you will receive a “grade-so-far” and a “final grade” letter respectively. They will be come attached to your midterm check in and final portfolio returns. In these letters you will receive a letter grade and an overview of your performance in the class up to that point, including attention to workshop performance. I have never encountered a student who didn’t have a clear sense of how they were doing in my class based on this system of evaluation, but if you should feel that you don’t know how you are doing, come see me. We’ll figure it out.
Different requirements require different kinds and amounts of effort; therefore, different assignments have different weight in terms of evaluation. Here is a rough breakdown of how things are weighted this semester:
ICRNs 10%
Writer’s Notebook 15%
Mentor Text Memoir 10%
Rethink/Revise & Midterm Portfolio 20%
Final Project & Final Portfolio 25%
Professionalization Presentation 10%
Interview with an Author 10%
Ultimately, your success in this class depends on the following:
- Fulfilling all of the requirements listed above,
- The quality of your written and oral work,
- Your efforts to try new things and think in new ways.
OTHER THINGS
Plagiarism. How you could plagiarize in a class like this, I don’t know, but don’t try.
Students with disabilities. Students who need special accommodations due to a documented disability should come to see me with written documentation of the specific disability and suggested accommodations before the end of the first week of classes. We can discuss specific accommodations at that time.
The Writing Studio. Located in the Academic Achievement Center, on the bottom floor of the Library, the Writing Studio is available to any and all students at whatever level of expertise you might be at. They are a marvelous resource for this class. You can talk to them at any stage of your writing—from brainstorming, to drafting, to editing. If you are interested in getting useful and thorough feedback, the Writing Studio is a good place to go. The work they do will reinforce everything we are doing in this class. And I think a lot of folks who work there would relish the chance to talk about your writing with you.
While this class will present you with many challenges, I believe it has its share of pleasures and rewards. What matters most to me is that you try to be the best student you are capable of being—that you try to improve as a writer and thinker. No good teacher wants to give a student a bad grade. Good standing in this class is always yours to lose.