Good Morning Everyone--
Happy short day of classes. I can’t be there today due to other obligations, so you are on your own to complete this work. Here are step-by-step directions.
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Ashlee
4/1/2019 07:27:48 am
-The top five books that explain the reason why I flunked English classes but loved to read
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LT
4/3/2019 07:26:00 am
-The top five books that explain the reason why I flunked English classes but loved to read
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Brayden Bustin, Kayla Lafleur, Zaraq Khan
4/1/2019 07:28:02 am
Top Five Books about why I hate High School.
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LT
4/3/2019 08:51:13 am
So iM not too sure about one and 3. Honestly I don’t see how you get a whole essay idea out of his job at KFC. And the first title only lets you talk about one thing—how much he hates high school. A great thesis let’s you talk about all the things you need to talk about.
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Sara,Laura,Barbara, Nate, Ethan
4/1/2019 07:28:39 am
1. Top five books that explain my love and hate relationship with reading.
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LT
4/3/2019 08:52:54 am
I dinMt know if we can safely make an argument that this guy didn’t like reading. He didn’t like reading for school but the short essay tells us he loved to read nearly anything else. Maybe the one about friends could work. I see both of those things in the essay.
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Tajaun,Tyjaya,Dylan,Jayden
4/1/2019 07:29:44 am
Top five books that explains how school wasn’t a huge impact in my life.
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LT
4/3/2019 08:58:40 am
The last one is a total cliche. I think that I sort of see where you are going with it I’d rather you not be so hall mark card about it and more specific to his experience. I don’t know that you can say school didn’t have a big impact on his life. I think you can say high school had a bad influence but one that sent him to college which had huge great impact on his life. So maybe more Top Five Books that explain how school had an impact on my life in good ways and in bad ways but always in powerful ways. I’m not sure I get the middle one.
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alex, taylor, deirdre
4/1/2019 07:43:39 am
Top Five Books That Explain How I stoped Being an Ignorant Worker at KFC and Strived to Become a Prospering Student in College.
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LT
4/3/2019 09:02:45 am
You guys did something different. You identified what the five books in his essay might be. And I can see how this is interesting—you could see how some of these choices would demonstrate some of the thesis statements that the writers above noticed. How some of these books were books he read to jot do other high school work and how some of these reading experiences are about how his world view changed because of a book. So what would the thesis be?
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